Tuesday 13 January 2015

Recommended revision guides

For short stories and poetry (GCSE English Literature)
http://www.amazon.co.uk/AQA-English-Literature-Anthology-Companion/dp/1844192776/ref=sr_1_2?ie=UTF8&qid=1421141697&sr=8-2&keywords=gcse+english+literature+short+stories+revision+guide




This is ideal for the knowledge you need on the poems and short stories. This should supplement your learning and notes in class, not replace them!!




English Language - Higher


http://www.amazon.co.uk/Revise-AQA-Language-Revision-Workbook/dp/1447940709/ref=sr_1_3?ie=UTF8&qid=1421141855&sr=8-3&keywords=gcse+english+language+revision+guide+aqa


This again should supplement the revision that you are set but is a good place to start if you feel you need further help.



Monday 12 January 2015

Question 1

The copy of the article hasn't transferred brilliantly - I'd suggest you look at it using the following link. The question is exactly the same, this is just easier to view and to understand the purpose, audience and genre of the text!


http://www.theguardian.com/travel/2010/mar/20/rafting-grand-canyon-arizona-colorado

Practise your Question One....


 
 Below is a sample Q1 for you.


Read Source 1, the online travel article called Rafting on the Grand Canyon by Elisabeth Hyde.
 
1.   What do you learn from Elisabeth Hydes article about where she has been and what she has been doing?                                                                                                               (8 marks)

Complete this in 12 minutes and bring it in by the end of the week for marking and feedback. Alternatively, email it to - forrestera@cockermouthschool.org

 
 
 
 
 
Rafting on the Grand Canyon
by Elisabeth Hyde
 
“Just two rules!” our guide Ed shouted. “Rule Number One stay in the boat! Rule Number Two
stay in the boat!”
 
It was early July, and we (me, my husband and our three teenage children) were in the middle of a
13-day, 225-mile trip down the Colorado river through the Grand Canyon.
 
On the first day, the 22 of us stood at the starting point, blinking at the sight before us: a long line of 6m rafts, masses of gear, an army of river guides scurrying about. This would be our world for the next two weeks.
 
We were a mixed group: our fellow passengers ranged from our 13-year-old twin daughters to a couple in their mid-70s. You can’t be shy on a Grand Canyon river trip. Not when you’re spending two weeks with two dozen strangers, floating down one of the biggest rivers in North America. You’re on the water for five to eight hours every day, and when
you’re off the water, you’re eating, sleeping, and bathing together in one of the most spectacular environments on earth.
 
Our party filled five inflatable rafts, each rowed by a guide and four or six passengers. All the gear we could possibly need was strapped into these boats. Its the tightest packing system I’ve ever seen, so that passengers ride perched on the side tubes prime seats with great views.
 
Rock, rocks, everywhere. During the calmer stretches our guides pointed out the various layers towering above us. Terracotta sandstone, flaky grey shale, massive maroon cliffs streaked with black I kept straining my neck gazing up at the steep walls closing in on us.
 
Riding the rapids in the Grand Canyon is a Disneyland-like experience – one second you’re plunging straight down into the trough of a wave, the next you’re getting drenched with cold spray as the boat shoots up and over the crest. Its a white-knuckle, roller-coaster ride that has people screaming with the thrill of it.
 
Which brings us back to Eds Rules. The only one who violated them during the trip was me. We hit one rapid at the wrong angle, and the boat rose up and pretty much ejected me into the foaming madness. For the next 45 seconds, I got sucked down and spun around and finally spat up into sunlight, gasping for air. Was I scared? A little. Exhilarated? More than I’ve ever been.
 
By the time we rowed the last stretch, toward Diamond creek, our clothes and hair held about a pound of silt each, but nobody cared. I welcomed the chance for a shower, but the trip left me with a desire to run away and become a river guide.

Wednesday 7 January 2015

English Language GCSE (Higher paper) - what you need to know about each question.

All the information you need about each question on the language is right here!


What should I do with it, I hear you ask? Well....do some of the following:




1) Copy it up into note form. Learn it. Try to write it from memory. Keep repeating that process until your can note it all from memory alone.




2) Make posters out of it and stick them in your bedroom. Other useful places include the back of your bedroom door (I bet you know what's there now - imagine how many times you look at it daily - make sure something useful to your success is on there instead). 




3) Create mind maps based on the images.


Basically, you need to get to a position very quickly where you know this information off by heart.


Question Information:




Q1: What do I need to know?


What do you understand about...


 12 minutes 8 marks


 


Key skills: understanding, support, overview of the issue/topic.


1. Begin by identifying the writer’s purpose: In this article, the writer is exploring the issue of...


2. Aim to make at least 4 points using point, quote, comment. Use one word quotations.


To target B4+ use phrases like: this shows, indicates, suggests, emphasises, indicates...


3. Sum up in a sentence: This article shows that people are ignoring the threat posed by climate change.


 




2: What do I need to know?

12 minutes 8 marks

Comment on the headline and images and how they link with the text

 

1. Begin by identifying the intended audience of the text- and the writer’s purpose.

2. Now look at the language choices in the headline - comment on the vocabulary.

3. Identify the techniques - explain how they support the writer’s purpose. Remember to use technical terms and to use quotations.

4. Now focus on the image. Look at it critically- how does it support the writer’s purpose?

5. Sum up: how does the headline and image affect the reader?

*in the headlines, look for alliteration, wordplay/puns, rhetorical qs, ellipsis - comment on why they are there. Always comment on any punctuation. With the image, look at the way it is cropped, composed & coloured.
Finally- consider: do headline and image contrast or complement each other?





Q3: What do I need to know?

Explain some of the thoughts and feelings the writer/narrator has...

12 minutes 8 marks

Key skills: inference, support, overview of the text.

1. Begin by summing up the character/writer’s feelings: In this article the writer feels...

2. Aim to make at least 4 points using point, quote, comment. Use one word quotations.

3. Sum up in a sentence: Finally, the character feels....

 

To target B4+ use phrases like: this shows, indicates, suggests, emphasises, indicates...

Comment on word choice and connotation: the word “longing” suggests the character’s need to...

Comment on punctuation if it gives information about the character’s feelings: the repeated question marks indicate the character’s anxiety...

 



Q4: What do I need to know?


20 mins 16 marks


Compare the ways language is used for effect


 


1. Compare the writer’s purpose.


In text 1 the writer’s purpose is to entertain; however, in text 3 the writer’s purpose is to inform....


2. Compare the overall tone and link to purpose.


In text 1, the writer uses an informal tone to emphasise the humorous approach to the topic whereas in text 3 the writer uses a formal tone to match the serious purpose...


3 .Compare similarities:


similarly, in addition, also, furthermore.


In text 1 the writer uses alliteration to emphasise ....similarly, in text 2 alliteration is used to draw attention to...


4. Compare differences:


however, although, whereas, unlike


In text 1 the writer uses a rhetorical question ironically to create humour whereas in text 3 the writer uses a rhetorical question to engage the reader...


 


*Always support points with brief examples


*Always evaluate the effect of techniques:


  to emphasise, draw attention to, contrast, create humour, engage, provoke, entertain, inform,  instruct, surprise, create impact, satirise, remember,





Q5: What do I need to know?


Inform, explain, describe: 3 paragraphs


16 marks: 10 for content, 6 for accuracy  25 minutes


Structure:

1. Introduce
2. Develop                                                                                                                               
3. Conclude



 


Aim to impress the examiner with your wit and originality!


 


Use a range of techniques, connectives, punctuation, sentence structures and vocabulary.


 
Techniques: Contrast, exaggeration. facts & figures, I/you/we, rhetorical questions, irony, repetition, rule of 3,lists, humour, sarcasm...








 Q6: What do I need to know?


Argue, persuade, advise: 4 paragraphs


35 mins 24 marks 16 for content, 8 for accuracy


Plan by identifying 5 points for/5 points against the topic...


1.Introduction


Make your view on the topic clear immediately. Begin with a strong statement


2.Main section


Build your argument with a series of powerful points.


3. Dismiss the opposition- forcefully!


Anticipate objections to your views and obliterate them! 


4. Conclusion


Finally / in conclusion...


Save your strongest point until last to make maximum impact. Use a persuasive technique to conclude.


 


*Use standard English and a formal style throughout. No abbreviations or slang. Aim to vary vocabulary, techniques, connectives and sentence structures. See ESSSAY SKELETON for examples.


 


*Include a range of persuasive techniques:


Contrast, exaggeration. facts & figures, I/you/we, rhetorical questions, irony, repetition,
rule of 3,lists, humour, sarcasm...












Structural things for Q5+6 - 1 word sentences used for specific and crafted impact, dramatic paragraphs used for specific and crafted impact. Use devices appropriate to the purpose of the text e.g subheadings if it's to inform, bullet points if you're explaining etc. You should always start with impact and end with impact.








Current Year 11 - here's where you'll find lots of revision!

You all know it. It's a fact. It's time....to start....revising!
Over the coming days, a range of posts will appear, with lots of things to help your revision.


There will be posts which remind you about key aspects of the exam as well as mock questions to complete. Any mock questions that you do should be brought to your teacher for feedback. If you type them, and cannot print them off, please email them to forrestera@cockermouthschool.org and put your teacher's name in the email so that they can be sent on to them.


Make use of everything that is being put on here - it's all here because it's useful and it will help you achieve success.


Good luck!